We're not sure what's more disappointing, the fact that this submission was so dull or the fact that the submitter didn't even bother to proofread their work.
Maybe next time, try adding more than just a few sentences to your submission. And for the love of all things caffeinated, use a thesaurus.
Here's a rejected submission #5 that shows you what we're looking for. It's not that hard, folks.
Don't make us reject you again, submit something interesting.
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